I love this! Thank you so much for entering, I definitely appreciate it and hopefully you enjoyed writing this! I absolutely love the plot you have created here and for sure want to know even more about it! The succession of this story is nice and it read well, which is always the first thing I like to see happen. I love that you created two characters with completely different perspectives, that is a sure was to an interesting story! As for constructive feedback, I will do my best to give you something hopefully useful, but of course by qualifications to do so may not be great. Really, coming from the perspective of someone who is reading this having no knowledge of what it’s about, I like that you laid out your ideas do openly, but to me this feels almost more like a laying out of ideas rather than an actual story. Of course I have no objections to this, but I would love to see you focus on one particular scene and throw in the important plot details throughout that. Overall, great piece I really did enjoy reading it and hopefully I’ll get to see your enter again on the next challenge! ♥️