this is gonna sound cheesey, but practice. Just draw often and don't be afraid to draw a bad drawing, we all do. on top of that try to change someone's drawing just a tad, to make your own style.

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you don't need to draw each individual hair, and make the hair a lil more fluffy because hair doesn't generally stand straight up. I mean, some does, but at that length it wouldn't. the hair should be loose and should never be just straight lines unless it's like a military haircut. but yeah I agree with the first comment. practice really does help a lot. I draw every day and my style has changed a lot but overall I'm really happy with my progress. I've been drawing my entire life almost every day, so it does take a lot of time to get really good, I mean I'm still not there. and also, dimensions are really important, so the shoulder that's further away should go down a little more and be smaller, while the opposite is true for the shoulder that's the closest. for the Adam's apple on the next, focus on where it would be starting if it was a real person rather from just guessing from the drawing. I'm sorry if this seemed harsh at all, this is just my best advice and I don't really know how to be nice in these cases??

oh and I didn't mention this but like nice ears!! ears are really hard to do and I'm honestly really impressed with yours

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make the jawline a little higher, and/or men the neck a little further down. oh and wide shoulders not thin ones because a man with small shoulders look less masculine