thx! I'll start now! (sry, I was out)

I know it's not my best, but I tried 🙈 I put a lot of work into the film strip, and used some PNGs for a good shadowy effect

OMG I read it and you are a really good writer! Keep it up! The only thing I recommend is to slow the story a bit. Cliffhangers, suspense, something to make us want to keep reading and not leave us completely satisfied until the end.

ok thanks!😊