Part 1. I'm reposting the beginning of this story because I have made some minor revisions. I'll post more later today. ✨😊 Like before, opinions are appreciated.

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Part 1. I'm reposting the beginning of this story because I have made some minor revisions. I'll post more later today. ✨😊 Like before, opinions are appreciated.

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I said it before, but once again, I adore this. 😍 Most of all, the last sentences. πŸ’• (AND THOSE ADJECTIVES!) ❀️❀️❀️
This is amazing!! You should really be an author someday! You'd go places.πŸ˜±πŸ’•βœ¨
OMG I adore this so much! AH I LOVE THE LAST SENTENCES THE MOST😱I really like the revisions you didβœ¨πŸ’•
lol I have account named @NforNotVendetta
oh and this reminds me of red queen
dude just wow. this is the start of a really goo story!
Love this! The only thing I would change about it (and I do this too on accident sometimes) is don't hit return between paragraphs. You'll notice in published books, paragraphs aren't spaced apartβ€”at least that's how I remember. Hopefully that made sense to you πŸ˜‚
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