alright, finally getting around to reading this and I am so excited! was so happy to see that you entered :) (probably gonna comment as I go)

“they don’t usually burn actual witches at the stake” 😯 I’m intrigued!

maybe after you mention Teresa, give a short description of where she’s at or something so she it doesn’t seem like she popped out of the blue so much.

always such cool ideas from you, love this traveling through fire thing!

ooh that prayer is beautiful

OH MY GOODNESS I JUST READ PART TWO BEFORE PART ONE! THAT MIGHT EXPLAIN WHY I WAS SLIGHTLY CONFUSED 😂😂😂 WELP.

next time I’ll pay more attention to the very clear I and II 😂

i like the dialogue with the ....’s but I think it slightly opposes the tone that you established Elisa as having. when I think of serene and serious I don’t necessarily think of lots of stuttering.

but also that’s obviously something very hard to say so it could be fine

maybe mention something about specifically why Costa Rica to Prague is an issue? I’m guessing the distance makes it harder. again, such a cool setting. love how you base things on real places, I’m too lazy for that and just make it all up 😂

alright Astrid, this is really really good! feel free to disregard any constructive criticism, I definitely feel under qualified to be giving it to you 😂 like always, you have such cool characters and plots and settings and it’s all executed so well. I love reading anything that you write, it’s always so intriguing and captivating. ♥️