I think this is amazing! But could you explain what you mean by she doesn't exist?

I'm not just saying this, but this sounds so professional!! You are clearly an amazing writer!! I can't wait to see more.

OMG THIS IS AWESOME!!!! I'd read this

re// Oh, okay that makes more sense! XD

Something I might add in would be a little plot twist with the person who sent her the acceptance/invite letter? Idk, I just think it would maybe be cool if we learned a bit more about them and the "organization"! :)