hey! np for the follow! thx for the follow back! this is super great so far! would you mind checking out my book on wattpad? my account is Moon_Dancer_Kid thx! can't wait for the next chapter!!!

feedback: I love the descriptions in the beginning! I've never heard of a plot like this, very original. I like it!

OMG that was AMAZING!!!

can't wait to read more

that is really good! good luck on pc❤️❤️❤️

I really like this

sounds like a great story so far keep up the good work!👍🏽

ok this is so good and suspenseful and I can't wait to see what happens next😱👏❤️

I love it! o(｀ω´*)o

Thanks for telling me about this! 💞（・｀ω´・)

No problem (｀・ω・´) 💞

Can't wait for part 2!! 😊😊

This is amazing!👏👏👏

I want to read more good thing there is a chapter two! CANT WAIT TO READ IT!😊👌👍❤️

great!

this is really enteresting!

👏👏👏👏👏👏 Awesome

OMG, I absolutely LOVED it, Great writing! Check out my contest

Woah, this is really good!!! The intro really caught my attention, and you have really good descriptions! It's like I can really see what's going on!!!! And the plot is really intriguing! I can't wait to keep on reading!!!!!😊💖😊

AMAZING!!!! you are really talanted. I wish i could write like you do

love it! 😍 Just make sure you check through for errors... I picked up a few 😕

eg. body's...... bodIEs

please don't take this as hate