Ah, I really liked reading this. It's always good to have a good plot with some romance tied in. 😂 You write beautifully, I loved your word choices! For constructive criticism all I could say is that I felt things were a little rushed. This is most likely because this is only a short clip of a story, but I just felt like some details were left out. Incredible story though, I loved reading it a lot! 💕😊🌿 Also, have you read The Scorpio Races by Maggie Stiefvater?

The reason I suggested the book was because I think it's sort of kinda similar to what you have here. 💕 It's a great book. 😂