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This is really good! You have a great plot going for you here, I can see it's all planned out! Great writing! 💕✨ For constructive criticism, all I really have to say is at some points I found myself a bit confused. Really, it was just because you tried to squeeze a lot of stuff into a short clip. It was amazing though, just quite compact. Great job! 🌿✨