I think that the first one looks awesome! I first started drawing anime in like- Grade 5 and I'm in grade 8 now, supposed to be in grade nine but the government happened XD It's your first time and honestly, it looks better than when I first started XD

thankyou that is kind of you to say !

I'm sorry to ask but what grade are you in? I'm just curious... sorry if I offend you

I started in grade two

but now I'm in grade five (I used to draw like the old Pokemon anime)