Before I give you any comments at all, would you like constructive criticism? I don't know how much I could come up with since you are already better at writing than I am, but I'm sure I can come up with something.

this is AMAZING!!!😱😱😱👏👏👏👏😍😍

this is the Greek Myth! I love their Mythlogy! Don't you?💗

Alright. I'm going to start by telling you how amazing this is. I can see that your writing is filled to the brim with emotion and passion and effort and it truly is beautiful. It makes it so much better for readers, it's what I know will allow you to go so far. And I don't have much critical to give you, both fortunately and unfortunately. One thing I could say, though this could be my fault, is that I was a bit confused at the end. This may simply be my misunderstanding or it could just be because this is merely a excerpt, and not a full story. Or maybe this could even be because I lack knowledge of geek mythology? But that's really all I have to say for now. You write incredibly, and you inspire myself and many others with that. 🌿✨💕