Beautiful writing! The wisdom with which you write is absolutely incredible! So much lovely detail! ✨

Constructive criticism: I had to get really picky with yours. My comment here will be about characters. I am extremely picky when it comes to characters. I don't really know the rest of the story here so these characters may actually work well with this plot but, in my opinion, the main character isn't flawed enough. He did everything with precision and an unrealistic amount of accuracy, something which I don't think is really possible in real life. But like I said, I don't know the rest of the story so this character could work well with this.