what is happening here

weeeeelllllllllll

I actually.......

hmmmmm..

I actually don't know..... xd

shoes don't actually slip on like socks, they don't bend around randomly, maybe try to make the shoes a bit more realistic? because to me it just looks like socks painted like shoes

the legs look lazy and doesn't fit the drawing, they're just inconsistent lines. It's hard to tell what the characters are doing, are they standing or sitting? it's important to make the legs reflect that because right now they're just floating in space

also it is clear that there are two people but only one pair of legs, unless 'White hair' is leg less there is no reason not to put her legs in the picture

and the brown below the paws looks like a giant p🍆nis than part of the shirt, if the werewolf is holding the white haired one that part of the shirt would be covered by the lower half of her body

and the eyes, you need to make the pupils more noticeable, if your character's eyes are yellow than you really should use a darker yellow instead of that pale yellow that you used, because it looks like he's got all white eyes

Shadowchild's art is her art. I get that you are just doing the "tips" or what ever the word for it is. but sometimes these things shouldn't be said. Shadowchild's art has its own beautiful style and I think it is completely perfect the way it is.

^stfu fùcking mlp piece of shít

OI YOU DO NOT TALK TO HER LIKE THAT.