I'm soo excited for the next part!!

This is amazing!! TBH I like Hadrien. Is that just me or?

oh and TYSM💕💫

@Faded--Spices, thanks! that makes me so happy to hear! 💕

Just AMAZING girlfriend! I can't wait to see what happens next!!😍💕😘

@Sagittariah, no problem 💕 and I am willing to bet it's not just you there 😊 he's pretty similar to a lot of lead guy characters these days, I think, but I'm trying to think of some ways to make him unique. 😂

@dream_in_pink, THANK YOU SO MUCH! 😱💕

OMG darling, stop it! Really! Your story is just amazing! You don't have to thank me! honestly!😘😘💕

omg—please continue this☺️💕

thanks, will check that out later! 💕😘

Oh my goodness, I don't want it to end! I'm so in loooove with Hadrien it's not funny😂😂 Can't wait till tomorrow😊😱

I hate Hadrien 😂 Don't take it as offensive though. He has his own character and his is beautiful. The words you use are awesome, and your stories never seem to bore me

I can't wait for more

Oh no of course not! I dislike him because of how he is slapping the poor children 😂 You've written him very well, I love the way you wrote him :)

^That sounded so repetitive 😮 (Also, sorry for being confusing, I should've been clearer)

Yeah! 😂 I don't think it would be possible to disapprove of your stories. Perhaps you could make this into a story on wattpad. You could copy and paste it. No pressure at all, though 💕 Just an idea

AAAH KEEP WRITING AGGHHHHH

also what will the girl's name be? the defiant one? I feel like she's really important and I was just wondering if you'd thought of a name?

Oh my gosh, thanks 💕😱 Your comments always make me feel better! I could help think of a name, what's it about? 🤔 (I'm so excited to read it!!)

love it so much!!!!

Ah it's Hiding Hope! I didn't realize, I just thought it was totally irrelevant to your book on Wattpad 😂

you are such an AMAZINg and TALENTED writer! omg I can't stop reading this💕

That's how I am with my book 😂 They fall into a magical kingdom inside an artificial mountain (You could say my story is... creative 😄) but I have absolutely no idea what should happen next. Oh, the confusion of being a writer XD

Know this, no matter what, I know your story will turn out great! 💕✨

Oh? I was reading chapter 7, and I saw King Hadrien in it 😮 That's fine though, I gave up on my other unpublished story 😬

The worst part is the ending 😂 I don't know how to tie everything up and still make it sound good 😬

I understand ☺️ You're welcome ✨

LIKE HOW THE HECK DO CHILDREN GET OUT OF THE INSIDE OF A HALLOW MOUNTAIN? 😂 Ahhhhhhh

That would work in your book 😉 I'm looking forward to reading it.

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, it was rushed since it was a short clip. I wrote longer, more detailed on stories on WattPad though. And no, I haven't.

Kathryn, I hope you have the absolutely best birthday! Enjoy being 15! 💕

PMG TRHIS IS AMEJAISJS AMAZING AND WHERE DO YOU GET THIS AMAZING AESTHETIC PICS FROM BRO

This is so great!!! The beginning has me hooked. What is it about? Now I have to know 😂 I feel like Hadrien's hiding something, I just don't know what... hopefully I'll find out 😊