the emotions, so pure

ooh that ending! wasnt expecting it!

overall, this is so good I love where you went with it , you really can never go wrong with a cute romance! I want to know more about these characters and their history! I do think this could benefit from some more descriptions, I would love to see some features of your characters that make them stand out. you know, like what makes them memorable and different from every other character. I have a soft spot for character development, let me tell you 😂 a way, thanks so much for entering its always amazing to get to read your writing :)

not gonna lie...I kinda wanted her to reject him lol (but that’s just my mean side showing lol). very good story!!!

ANOUKKKK!!!! this is so so so amazing like how??? eeee I wanna hear more!!

aw cmon William just kiss her already 🙄