I love how it switched to like people eating bread at the sentence. like how come they don't have any more bread?!😭😱💕✨

this is amazing so far!! I'm excited to keep reading!😊

THIS IS SO GOOD!!

eeeek!!! so excited!!!

bread...bread... yum! 🍞

I love this

you inspired me (BFF-_GIRLS) to make an acc like this

can I?

plz read the stories

do you have storybird. you should. my acc is called BFFGIRLS

I like this so far! I'm just not sure so far what's going on bc everything happened so suddenly

Nice start!! Here's some feedback: I loved the intensity and the pauses in this chapter? prologue? BUT, I do think you should of introduce more of the plot and the other characters. So I was a little confused by the last sentence, but you are off to a fantastic start.💖