New Year, new story being added to this account—trying to challenge myself into some "first person" writing. Here's "A Night with the Endecotts," which is based on a real story. What are your thoughts on this?

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New Year, new story being added to this account—trying to challenge myself into some "first person" writing. Here's "A Night with the Endecotts," which is based on a real story. What are your thoughts on this?


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I think this will be very interesting;)
I am looking forward to the next few chapters :)
This is so good I hardly even realized it was first person!!! 🌿💕 If you ask me, you accomplished this style much better than I. ✨
Emme is making me happy, a lot. — Everyone seems so good on here, I'll miss them this few days! 😂❤
i feel an instant love for cairo:) i love this! and, i'm terrible at writing first person (but you slayed it!)
👏 WOW. I really love this one, especially the voice of the character😏
@Photo-Booth, Hope so! 😌🌿 The real story means a lot to me so I hope I get to do a good job here. 😊
@GatheringBlue, Coming Soon! 👀❤️
wow, you impress me with EVERY single story you write👌✨
@etcetera_, Doubt it, but thanks so much! 😌🌸 It is always so uplifting to hear such things from you. 💕
@maplebear, Wow, thanks! I didn't know you read this account posts. 😍🍃
@Hard_Moments, And it makes me happier to hear that. 🎨🙈 The next days? Where are you headed, girlie? 👀✨
@typeofwriter, Thank you so, so much, Jules. I wasn't sure about the writing but I'm quiet happy with the outcome. 😊🍃 And yes—Cairo and everyone in here is "such a character." 😂
@sporty_puppy, Thank you! It took some thinking to get to choose it. ☺️💦
@ilüvsüshi, And you keep my spirits up with every single one of your comments. 😌🎨