Hi! Thank you so so much for entering, can’t wait to read this and let you know what I think! ☺️ right off the bat, love the image that the first two lines are putting in my head. “Powdery pigment” is such a good little alliteration, so nice! Wow the flow into the next three line is incredible, they fit together so nicely and it’s so easy and fun to read. And such good imagery! The line “relentless dreams” doesn’t quite sit right with me. You have set up such a good flow leading up to it, it really puts a lot of anticipation on that line to finish that flow satisfactorily, if you know what I mean. It’s always hard to find things that fit right. Blossoming dreams and growing dreams sound great together, and maybe if you can’t find anything else to go with them just don’t add the third one? Love the repetitions of “you have flowers in your blood.” That’s such a cool and unique line, it’s good that you gave it its fair chance to shine! :) “each bloom streams into your veins” SUCH A GOOD LINE! Wow, overall this is so good I really enjoyed reading this, would love to read more from you in the future! 🌸♥️