happy thanksgiving— here’s a short snippet of writing i’ve done as i’ve began to write again. I’m trying something a bit more unconventional, and while I haven’t given much context to this snippet, i would love to hear some feedback + constructive critici

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happy thanksgiving— here’s a short snippet of writing i’ve done as i’ve began to write again. I’m trying something a bit more unconventional, and while I haven’t given much context to this snippet, i would love to hear some feedback + constructive critici


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*constructive criticism
consider me intrigued :0
man imagine having the motivation to write- couldn’t be me😞🤚
so captivating. I like.
me: ooh she wrote stuff *proceeds to read it out loud in a british rp dialect*
hey kat! hru? i feel like we haven’t had an actual conversation in forever... it’s been way too long.
here i go againnnn
hey kat!! hru?
i miss everyone like crazy🥲🥲🥲
yeah school is really rough this year. hopefully we’ll be able to come back, at this point i don’t care what way that happens to be in
i miss being chaotic with you guys i haven’t been able to express myself🕺🏼😅
new post please press me it REALLY IMPORTANT 🐻‍❄️❄️ we need to fix this problem please spreed the word