also this is inspired by the movie the village, i really recommend it the ending is horrible though lol

i just reread this and realized i put almost no descriptions i’m so embarrassed 😩

yeah I’ll definitely give you some feedback! I’m about to go to Ben now, but I’ll do it tomorrow. and definitely don’t hold back from entering the challenges, I call them a challenge for a reason :) and, if nothing else, I think the only way to get better is to practice! 💕

okay, I think that the idea that you have is really cool, which in my opinion is the most important part of creative writing. The hard part, obviously, is getting that idea to sound as good on paper as it does in your head. What you have so far is good, I really like the build up and mystery. As for suggestions, I think the main thing that I’d say is maybe to not reference the creature as it for so long. As a reader, that use of “it” made it harder for me to understand what was happening, since I was not aware that “it” was even a living thing. Also, just general advice not related to this story, I think it’s important in creative writing to focus on a specific scene when writing short stories or ideas rather than large plot points. Then you can incorporate the plot points into the scene while making it sound less like you’re stating facts. So yeah, hopefully this helps a little! I enjoyed reading this, looking forwards to hopefully reading more from you :)