love this Leila !!❤️❤️😱

This is great!

aahhhh! don't get eaten Gretchen!😂✨💕

I really wish I could be as good a writer as you are

This holds a lot of suspense about what's going to happen!

I'm going to read this in the morning...I get if you are busy, but do you want to do a collab? But, not just a collab....a writing collab?✏️💕

Feedback: I loved the intensity!!! I also think you are doing the archery correctly...that made no sense let me rephrase. I like how the main character isn't holding up her bow at all times, instead has it by her side. Okay enough about archery....I absolutely loved this chapter and I hope to see the next one soon.