this is really good. I love your sentences- I don't know if you made them sort of short on purpose? But it makes it kind of emphasized, like the "rising. rising" part. ✌️ can't wait to read more!

Oh yeah, it is a memory from when the girl was a baby, so I tried to make the thoughts simple, like how one would see it before they really knew words and truly could comprehend what was going on. Thanks so much for the compliment!

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I love it!

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I actually started panicking when I was reading 😂 like I was imagining this like it had happened to me on a cruise ship or something and I got really scared 😳 that is the mark of good writing!

Aw, thanks!!