Collage by afterglow-

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Awesome! Thank you for remixing your collage! Proofreaders will read over it shortly and give you some feedback! Great job 😘😘
I believe in your first paragraph you said “as” and I think you meant “has”😊
In your paragraph about the following pages you had a typo saying “woory” instead of “worry” and you accidentally said “are” when you meant “aren’t” but that’s it, you did great!