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well one thing I do have to say I like about your art is, you do have a common knowledge of how to shape out basic anime-style features like the eyes and nose and such. you appear to be going after that traditional anime style and perhaps chibi, looking like something canon straight out from your favorite anime. this is not a bad style at all, but it takes lots of practice and certainly proportion. your art, not to be harsh, portrays the lingering feeling of "I drew an eye, a nose a little below that, then I drew a circle around it for a face and drew the rest" which is one thing I recommend working on. shaping out your face and defining placements may seem cliche, but it will make your art more likable to both you and others. humans have a derogatory sense for loving things done correctly and satisfactory, it's a little bit of OCD inside every one of us. it's especially applicable to the style you've taken up, where one mistake in the design can be screenshotted and laughed down upon by ignorant critics and fans who crave perfection and a sense of purpose. also one thing I must point out, the eyes look like they are gazing into the deep dark depths of space @^@ common mistake, nothing wrong with your art. the eyebrows seem to be the only defining feature as to their expression. consider adding a bit of light, a darker pupil, or something defining in their eyes to make them stand out, these eyes work very effectively on spacey and mysterious characters like Hinata from Naruto, but there's a difference between misty and lifeless. overall, check your proportions more carefully, and consider looking at a picture (not for a base or even as a reference, but so that you know where the limbs on the face and body belong). these can be exaggerated depending on the style (for example I exaggerate muscles, noses, lips, eyes, etc for artistic effect bc that's my style) and I'm not saying you can't do that but I can see where your style is going. you should lean towards conventional anime for more inspiration, I promise with tons of practice that style looks AMAZING :0 and I know you can get there, because you practice so hard and improve astronomically. I'm not just saying that. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future :) and I hope you can use what you learn now to bump up your skills tomorrow! overall rating 7.5/10, keep it up uwu