Small excerpt from a project I'm working on. It would be awesome if you could leave some feedback and constructive criticism! May share more of this then. :))

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Small excerpt from a project I'm working on. It would be awesome if you could leave some feedback and constructive criticism! May share more of this then. :))

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woah😍 i really like how you don't give the audience too much context—it makes you really appreciate what's there and piece everything together👌🏻🖊
i think i like mike the best👐🏻💕
Absolutely beautiful! 😱💕 (I'm so so sorry I haven't been keeping up on the stickers 😫 I'll try and get more planets done!)
Wonderful piece of writing Astrid!✍🏻And yeah my favorite part is hanging the Christmas lights!💕You should see my grandma when I just start sing Holly Jolly Christmas😂.
love this✨beautiful as always Astrid💕
God, you write in a special way.
if you wrote a book I would totally pay for it cause you're such a good writer💕
it's so cool!! and I love that there's French in it!!
Ah, I've heard of that book! I read the chaos walking series awhile back, which is also by Patrick Ness... Illuminae was amazing!
@typeofwriter, Thank you so very much for always being both supportive and honest. 😌🙈
@typeofwriter, Same, I enjoy writing about him so much. 🌿❤️
@LatteBunny, Don't worry! I'm sorry for my delay, too. Exams are killing me! 🙆🏻👌🏽
@Photo-Booth, I'll have that in mind. 😂☀️
@Issietheheron, Thanks, Issie. 🌹🎨
@Hard_Moments, You're why the word "Meliorism" exists. 💕
@PastelCreative, THANKS! That made my day. 🌻☺️
@little_lollipop, Thanks, Cate! I'm trying to learn French so that's probably why. 😂✨
@sporty_puppy, Glad you enjoyed it! 🌹😌
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