it's good, just needs to have a bit more detail and her thoughts. 👍🏼

I'm excited to see what happens next!🌿

YAY ANOTHER STORY FOR ME TO READ!!!

I think I like his one a little more than warriors heart

Sorry now I'm on my writing account. Feedback: It was amazing!!!! I think I like.....Warriors Heart better (Because of the archer?......maybe) But seriously both are very good. The only advice I can give you is add more of her thoughts. It will make the story more dynamic.

amazing