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Oops, sorry about the typo 😬 It's not 'lift,' it's 'light.'
This reminds me of Wintergirls by Laurie Halse Anderson! Have you read it?❤️
No, but I've heard of it
So good! I don't know how you do it! 💕✨ You are just so good at writing! For constructive criticism, there is one small error I found at the end of the piece. You switched point of views, and I don't think that was intentional. Just a switch from third person to first person. Besides from that, I don't really have much to say. ❤️
Thank you so much! I never noticed the switch in the point of view. I'll try to focus on that next time 💙