I’d love your feedback! I’m new to this whole poetry thing so if you have any advice I’d gladly take it! ✨☺️

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I’d love your feedback! I’m new to this whole poetry thing so if you have any advice I’d gladly take it! ✨☺️

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they are so good ! ♥️💫
personally i like the simile and metaphor one!
these are amazing, especially since you’ve just started poetry! 👏🏼♥️
I think my favorites were Death and Grief, Family, & the one about everything being golden (I forget what you called it haha 😂♥️)
Nothing’s better than peer-workshopping already beautiful pieces.
oooo yay!!
they’re all so beautiful. i think my favorite is ghazal
these were all amazing, but my favorites were the ghazal, object, and the shadow. you have a talent, my friend.
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these were all wonderfully written, but I think you should enter Death and Grief and Family
happy birthday! :))))💗
uhhhhhh your poems are really good!!! my favs are family & object, but honestly they’re all really great💛
Yaaaas girl! I’m so excited to hear your peices!
Aahh thank you 😩☝️
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